Friday, September 3, 2021

kia ora bloggers to day i will be showing you one of my pieces of writing we do it in are free writing we have 10 mins i have to put at lest on personification in your story but i put two which is a good thing                                             if you had to do a story like this what would you put in?
 

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 3, 2021 at 10:17 AM

    Hey Ella, I think it is really cool how you guys do free writing! I remember doing free writing and it was so fun! 1 thing I noticed was that your spelling and Grammar had room for improvement. Just remember to read over and double check words if your not sure.

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  2. MrsKerinSeptember 4, 2021 at 10:32 AM

    Kia ora Ella, what a great start to a story, I liked your personification! Remember that 'i' is a capital letter when it stands on its own.

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