Hi this is my slide about how to be the be the best version of myself. it took me 2 days to finish it and I'm proud of my work.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, April 9, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hey there Ella my Name is Frankie and I go to the same school as you!, Im in toroa at the other end of the school. So I saw your blog and Loved it! I enjoyed how you shared you experiences with life and how to be the est you can be. Maybe next time go through you grammar but besides that keep up the good work!
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Frankie
Hey Ella sorry about that by Grammar I meant reading over you sentences and making sure they are readable and understandable.
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